Two Lovers and a Bird - First Cut

Today is a day for trying something new (as every day should be).  Here it goes: I am going to post the first cut of a little project I have been working on.  It is not complete as the second cut is already in the works. 


The monologues you will hear in the video are actually part of a few character sketches I have for a screenplay I am working on.  They stuck with me and the idea for this little film came about.  

I would love feedback.  You know, the honest, brutal, first impression kind.  So, sit back, take a look, and let me know what you think.